This has a nice texture to it.
This has a nice texture to it.
:This is going to be stuck in my head for a long time.... 0:04-0:07 the rising pitch in the background pisses me off... good job
1:04 *cocked* Woah! XD
The main riff is really nice. The melody line starting at 1:18 has a really interesting feel to it..
the clap sound at 0:40-0:52 and 2:22-2:34 \is kind of annoying... something about the same exact sound repeating... especially something so piercing... it kind of makes the moments two dimensional.
Beside that, everything else was fantastic!
Thank you! I get what you mean by the clap sound, I think I should've thrown a filter on it or pushed it back further in the mix but it's meant to be percussive, not really moving. However, you've got a good point with the two dimensional thing.
Thank you for your review! Really appreciate it
I like it! The Melodies are nice... especially the one with the chromatic bits.
Thanks for dropping by man!
In my opinion, it feels too full. If you want a spacey sound then you have to get the 'sound of the universe' into the background, but it should be the main focus... What I mean is, if you imagine you're listening to this song in a big room and you had a separate speaker for each instrument, I would put it at the farthest point in the corner and maybe face it toward the wall... or maybe even bring it to the next room over so the sound has to travel through the wall... ... and then have ambient unimportant noises close by... that's what I would do anyway...
Not bad though. The effect is really cool.
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